Sketchbook project 1 continued
Following on from my original sketch I did some thumbnails of the girl on the bus, sticking to 3 values to make sure everything reads.
After my critique the decision was between the top left and bottom right thumbnails.
I chose the bottom right, and didn’t completely stick to the value structure (which I should’ve), but kept in mind the principles of composition. Most importantly, putting a light shape on a dark shape or vice versa. This assures the silhouette of everything reads and will help direct your focus.



